9 Ocak 2012 Pazartesi

ERROR-CORRECTION

SENTENCES WITH ERRORS

ERROR CATEGORY / CATEGORIES

NAME/DESCRIPTION OF ERROR

CORRECTION

What I want to tell is that our curriculum should be easier than that of we have now.

Local errors
Global errors

Incorrect use of the preposition ‘of’ and incorrect use of dependent relative clause.

What ı want to tell is that our curriculum should be easier than this one we have now.

The other point,maybe for most of us it is a problem, is being have to live without family.

Global error

Incorrect verb tense
The other point which is probably a problem for most of us is having to live without family.
Anymore we are not child.
Local error
Singular plural error
We are not children anymore.
The most important thing is student can get the best knowledge in here.

Global errors
Local errors

The missing word ‘that’ and the missing article

The most important thing is that a student can get the best knowledge in here.

Metu is worth to deal with problems with which we can come across in Metu.

Local errors
Incorrect word form
Incorrect use of the preposition ‘with’

Metu is worth dealing with the problems we can come across.

3 Ocak 2012 Salı

ÖSSUR

      High quality, high performance prosthetics
…for a Life Without Limitations

     Breakthrough technologies and award-winning designs have combined to create a leading range of prosthetic solutions, with the emphasis firmly on clinical outcomes and quality of life. They include innovations such as the Propprio-foot, the foot that uses artificial intelligence to sense and react appropriately to stairs and slopes, and Total Knee Junior-the first, and for many the best response to children's prosthetic needs.
    I know about Össur because of a paralympic athlete, Oscar Pistorius.He is an inspirationalman to me because when he was 11 months old, his legs were amputated halfway between his knees and ankles.
    He now uses prosthetics of Össur and leads a successful life.He has some records in athletics.And he says that "You're not disabled by the disabilities you have, you are able by the abilities you have.''.I am not in a position to clearly understand him but I agree with him.